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Gdslvqkrsall The Movie R Rough Draft

Scene 1

It starts of with an empty bedroom and the phone ringing, the phone is in the bed

In the background you can hear some music and people talking as if a party is going on. The kid runs to his room and looks at the phone it reads Mom

He looks surprised and shouts out the door.

Boy: Everyone SHUT UP! Now!

He clears his throat and prepares for something

He picks of the phone with a rough voice

Boy: Hello? … Hi mommy

Mom: How you feeling?

Boy: not good at all. My throat is really soar

Mom: well stay put. Don’t do a lot of walking around.

Boy: Ok mom

A girl walks in. He does a hand gesture and she leaves

Mom: hows kaley doing?

Boy: she’s in her room, she’s been playing all day.

Mom: Call her up let me talk to her

The boy looks around surprised

Boy: ok? Kaley

He calls with a strained voice

Mom: NO don’t scream.. Go give her the phone

The boy gets up and walks to his little sisters room

Shes sitting in her bed with her arm crossed..

Kaley: Go AWAY.. When is mom coming I want to tell her.

Boy: Oh Kaley I was playing with you before. of course you can come outside and play around with my friends.

Kaley: really? You were playing

Boy: YEAH. Of course I was.. We were trying to make you a little surprise just for you

Kaley: Ok lets go!!

She gets off her bed

Boy: No wait you have to talk to mom before though

Kaley: ok

Boy: But you cant tell her my friends are here. Because she will get mad that she’s missing the party ok?

Kaley: ok!

They walk back to the room and the boy gives kaley the phone

Kaley: Mom?

Mom: Hey Sweety, I am sorry I am not there. But something came up.

Kaley: ok mommy. When will you be back

Mom: oh in a couple of hours. I Promise

Kaley: ok. Love you

Mom: love you

The boy is making gestures so she can hurry up.

There are 3 kids standing by the door..
Kaley Hangs up the phone and gives it to him and walks out

Boy: where are you going??

Kaley: to the party

Boy: Oh no.. not now. We have to do some….. Preparing were going to play um…

Looks at his closet

Boy: twister

Kaley: YAY! Ok

And she walks to her room

The boy follows behind and locks her door

The boy walks out back to the party

Boy: LETS GET IT STARTED!!!!

Friends scream

Kaley sits in bed waiting.

The camera focuses to the window as the it fades into night

Kaley is laying down Sleeping in her bed!



Scene ends